Advice on this PvP build I made?

I’ve been experimenting with a few PvP builds and I’ll list two and really would appreciate any feedback and advice

Edit: I finally just got both pieces of Balorghs so I’d like to incorporate that into either build. But with build 1 i don’t know how I can wear two pieces monster and both mark of parish and shattered fate I guess I can’t So maybe put it in build 2?

Which is best? Build 1 or 2?

Build 1:

5 pieces mark of the parish

5 pieces shattered fate

Oakensoul

Archdruid devyric shoulders one piece for more offensive penetration

Lover Mundus stone

64 points in stamina

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Build 2:

Mechanical acuity front bar

Rallying cry back bar

Marlyn’s ring

Bloodspawn helm and shoulders

34 magicka

30 health

I wait for mech acuity to queue 100% crit then switch to back bar and proc rallying cry

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I feel like build 2 has a lot of potential

But I’m leaning to build 1 for more survivability and also I’ve read offensive penetration is better than crit for PvP so that is more build 1

What do you think of these two builds strictly for PvP ? Open to changes, suggestions , or even totally different sets

Thanks so much